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Broken Hearts_Injured Souls by ~Dark-Demon8:iconDark-Demon8:



Hold your lips my love,
Nothing more is needed to be said.
Broken hearts and injured souls.

The cards have been dealt,
Nothing left to be hidden –
Show me your hand,
Beat me again at this frivolous game.

The sheets of truth are stained,
Blood of the innocent,
A testament to how much damage you can do.

Lock and load.
Point the gun,
Pull the trigger,
It shouldn’t be hard –
You’ve done it before.

Words from the mouth of a hopeless lover –
Not enough to restrain your hatred,
Touch of an inexperienced lover –
Not enough to tame your resentment.

Count.
Count back from ten,
And once you hit zero,
Teach me how it is done,
Teach me how to a break heart.

Some say love isn’t love,
Until it’s tragic,
If this is so,
My love for you is endless,
For it is always being killed by you.

Slightest movement of the mouth,
Smallest touch of the hand –
Enough to ruin me,
You have so much power.

I would do anything for you,
No matter the pain it causes –
Love is unconditional.
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Author's Comments

I've been experimenting lately with different styles and formats for writing.

This one was a spur of the moment thing after reading something that sorta got me thinking - this is what I came up with.

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:iconxiaomisa:
A testament to how muchyou damage you can do.

^ just something i found...? other than that -

i missed your pretty writing style! so im catching up on your poems right now (: :heart:

funnily enough, i think i can relate to them..
:icondark-demon8:
DON'T SAY THAT!!!
PLEASE DON'T!
I don't want you to be able to relate to them...
It means bad things DD':
No I'm sad


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[.So eager for eternal damnation.]

=Org-infinity Sell them your heart today, or else >D

I ish claiming Terra from the ~bishie-stalker-club


¶Diamonds&&Angels♥
:iconxrosesxrulex:
I'm quite sorry for not keeping up with you lately. I suppose I must've accidently clicked on the box to stop watching your stuff.

But, that's beside th epoint of this message, I do like this poem. It speaks to me, quite loudly, acctually.
Though it's not fully ture for my life, some parts are right on que.

Well done.

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Photography, Drawing, and Writing are what I love creating/doing. Music=Inspiration.

Go check out my gallery and give me luffs! :excited:

-Rose
:icondark-demon8:
I'm glad to hear from you again though...

I just hope that the worst of the poem isn't true for you...
That would be distressing DX


--
[.So eager for eternal damnation.]

=Org-infinity Sell them your heart today, or else >D

I ish claiming Terra from the ~bishie-stalker-club


¶Diamonds&&Angels♥
:icondark-demon8:
I'm glad to hear from you again <33

I just hope that the worst of the poem isn't true for you...
That wouldn't be cool </3


--
[.So eager for eternal damnation.]

=Org-infinity Sell them your heart today, or else >D

I ish claiming Terra from the ~bishie-stalker-club


¶Diamonds&&Angels♥
:iconxrosesxrulex:
Meh...My love life is really screwed up right about now. My most recent stuff posted is kind of explaining things....

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Photography, Drawing, and Writing are what I love creating/doing. Music=Inspiration.

Go check out my gallery and give me luffs! :excited:

-Rose
:iconarjitcapricorn:
:-) Speechless !

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In Love..
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:iconarjitcapricorn:
Love These Lines Specially :-

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Count back from ten,
And once you hit zero,
Teach me how it is done,
Teach me how to a break heart..!!
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Indeed, Touching !!

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In Love..
View ---> [link]
:icondark-demon8:
Thanks.
I'm glad you liked it.

xx


--
[.So eager for eternal damnation.]

=Org-infinity Sell them your heart today, or else >D

I ish claiming Terra from the ~bishie-stalker-club


¶Diamonds&&Angels♥

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